Staying in poems.
I wrote a couple of poems when I stayed in last Friday night. The reason why I write gains more depth the more I come to terms with my swirling thoughts and emotions. It’s how I make sense and make peace.
Thank you to my muse (in more ways than inspiration).
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On Thinking Too Much
There’s a pebble in my shoe
that tries not to be too loud.
At first,
I caught it giggling.
Then it started to gossip.
Then it grew tired, and started to sigh.
“Excuse me,” I said.
“What are you doing there?”
It looked at me.
Thumped,
sighed,
and buried
itself even
deeper.
I followed it,
trying to find out
where it came from,
and how
to remove it.
It burrowed in the sole
of my shoe,
I couldn’t find it.
I was walking,
limping,
unsteady.
I grew tired.
And stopped.
Inhaled.
Removed my shoes.
And ran.
- MPN 2008
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nice one, yelle!
Thanks, Jaja.
Hey, link kita, ha.
hey! it’s very nice. ur such an artist talaga!
i really like how the poem was executed. you give a situation, then try to solve it, but you go out of that situation in order to solve it. saka it’s really a very nice metaphor
Thanks, Mykel. Huhu. That means a lot to me.
Wihee!